1.太過自信的句子:iamquitecertainthataninterviewwillsubstantiatemystatementsbetweentwoandfoureveryafternoonexcepttuesdayyoucanreachmebytelephoning73143.我深信面談可以證實(shí)我的話。您可在每天下午二至四時(shí)(星期二例外)打73143號(hào)電話通知我。
2.較具體有效的句子。mayihaveaninterview?myresidencetelephoneis(42)4398.youreachmebycallingthatnumberuntiljune3.afterjuly2,myaddresswillbekenthouse,brettonwoods,newhampshire.可否惠予面談?我住處電話為43981號(hào)。六月三十日以前我都在上址,七月二日以后,我的新址為新罕不夏州布列登林肯特屋。
3.陳腐的句子:hopingyouwillgivemeaninterview,iam……(我希望您惠予面談)anticipatingafavorabledecision,iwaityour……(等候您的佳音)trustingyourreplywillbesatisfactory,iremain(靜候滿意的答復(fù))
4.哀求式的句子,不夠完整(漏掉面談時(shí)間):won‘tyoupleasegivemethechancetointerviewyour?icanbereachedbycallingkenmore69781.懇請(qǐng)惠予面談。請(qǐng)打電話k-69781
(b)改寫后:mayihavetheopportunitytodiscussthismatterfurtherwithyou?mytelephoneiskenmore69781.youcanreachmebetweennineandfiveo‘clockduringtheday.可否惠予面談以便進(jìn)一步商討?我的電話是k-69781。我從上午九時(shí)到下午五時(shí)都可接通。
5.(a)軟弱、羞怯的:ifyouthinkicanfillthepositionafteryouhavereadmyletter,ishallbegladtotalkwithyou.讀完此信后倘您認(rèn)為敝人可補(bǔ)缺,敝人愿和您一談。
(b)改寫后(較佳):ifmyapplicationhasconvincedyouofmyabilitytosatisfyyou,ishouldwelcometheopportunitytotalkwithyou,sothatyoumayjudgemypersonalqualificationsfurther.
6.(a)懷疑,不妥、不安全的:ifyou‘reinterested,letmeknowimmediately,asi‘msureandinterviewwillconvinceyoui‘mthemanforthejob.倘貴公司有興趣,請(qǐng)即告知,敝人深信與您面談可以使您相信,敝人適合擔(dān)任此職。
(b)改寫后:mayihaveaninterview?youcanreachmebytelephoneattaipei884525betweenthehoursof7-9a.m.and5:3-9:3p.m.anyevening.可否賜予面談?您可在每天上午七至九時(shí),下午五時(shí)半至九時(shí)電884525號(hào)。