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l(f)rg:2017-03-23 ݋:

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һ(Disagreements)

^һ²ָ^һ߀˔(sh)IJһ•rB(ti)һ¼~һµ

1. When one have money he can do what he want to 

(һXʲô͸ʲô)onedžΔ(sh)˷QhaveĞhas ;ͬwantĞwantsǵ͵^һ¡

Ğ飺Once one has money he can do what he wants (to do)

Zeλ(Misplaced Modifiers)ӢZchZͬͬһZھӲͬλӵĺx׃@һcЇW]ҕ˲Ҫ`1. I believe I can do it well and I will better know the world outside the campus

betterλòھĩ

Ӳ(Sentence Fragments)

ڿZHpɽքZĵȣľȫԱиеĕZͲͬˣӽY˼_@Nrl(f)䌑Ժ󣬹PЩafrl(f)

1. There are many ways to know the society. For example by TV radio newspaper and so on 

벿“for example by TV radio newspaper and so on ”һľHһЩB؞~Zܪɾ

Ğ飺There are many ways to know society for example by TV radio and newspaper

ҴZ(Dangling Modifiers)

^ҴZָ׵ĶZcӵ߉݋Pϵy塣磺At the age of ten my grandfather died. @“at the age of ten”ֻcʮqr]f“ l”ʮqrһmy grandfather ҂@ҴZ_һcȫͲôMˡ

Ğ飺When I was ten my grandfather died

1. To do well in college good grades are essential

вʽZ “to do well in college” ߉݋Z

Ğ飺To do well in college a student needs good grades

~`(Misuse of Parts of Speech)

“~`”F(xin)飺~~;~~;~~õȡ

1. None can negative the importance of money

negative ϵ~`~

Ğ飺None can deny the importance of money

~ë(Troubles in Diction)

Diction ָضľm?sh)x~ZĆ}ڽ̌Wrgo̎ƽr@滨ĕrgOޣӰˌWڌЛ]B(yng)õõTSÁи~?sh)e`ȱȽ

1. The increasing use of chemical obstacles in agriculture also makes pollution

(rI(y)滯W|ʹõIJҲȾ)@Ȼobstacles“ϵK”“ϵK”`substance“|”“the increasing use (ӵʹ)” Ğ“abusive use (E)”

Ğ飺The abusive use of chemical substances in agriculture also causes/leads to pollution

٘(Redundancy)

ԺFӛ]һ~;]һoҪľÆ~IJ~M;~MIJÏľ磺

In spite of the fact that he is lazy I like him

“the fact that he is lazy”ϵͬ^Zľ҂“~MIJÏľ”

ԸĞ飺In spite of his laziness I like him

1. For the people who are diligent and kind money is just the thing to be used to buy the thing they need

ӿԴ󺆻

Ğ飺Diligent caring people use money only to buy what they need

CZe`(Comprehensive Misusage)

^“CZe`”ָʮNe`߀TrB(ti)ZB(ti)c̖Сȷe`

1.Today Money to everybody is very importance our‘s eat cloth live go etc

σݾинF(xin)e`Ҫӛ@ЩM@Щ}İl(f)9Ne`һЩӆ~ھһЩo~΃@s@Ҫpٰl(f)ֻҪжeZиȻl(f)~rl(f)

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